Paramount Tower

My Poem - The Apprehension of Prettneys Heart is Paramount.?

Hey, can you rate my poem. The love I got for her is perpetual, exponential and exceptional. The aura I extrude, the energy I create is pure. There's this lovenergy power I have for her, and there's no cure. _________________________________________________________________________________ Must I scream it louder? "I'm getting sicker by the hour!!!" Someone PLEASE drive me to the medical tower; I need an injection Because, this infection is causing an erection, which in turn allowed me to let out affection and I am hoping that I can make a connection, before my time of ascension, because Brittney is MY QUEEN; she won the election. Brittney is mother nature, and she's my natural selection. Brittney is caring on the inside, diamond strong on the outside. _________________________________________________________________________________ If I could, it would be my intention to make an invention that would relieve ALL tension in her lower back while she's riding with me in my Cadillac. Hmmm that reminds me, inspections are needed for the G.P.S. directions, 'cause while I'm heading down fast on the highway towards her, per se (not pronounced "pussy"), intersexion, I want to go into the right area. But I can't push the throttle too fast, I have to obey the limit, because if I dont, the cherry tops; the cops, will come, stop and arrest me for letting out so much emission. _________________________________________________________________________________ This girl embodies a whole lot; she's quite a collection. I'm not saying Brittney’s a goddess, but she's on the road to being like perfection. _________________________________________________________________________________ ATTENTION! ATTENTION!! Are you listening world!? There are a few things about this girl I forgot to mention. Her complexion does not need correction. (she's caramel brown, with a butt thats round). “I'm the kind of boy who appreciates a good body, regardless of the make.” I know Brittney’s not fake, she’s not a snake, and she’d would be the one I date. If I ate the devil’s food, she’d be the cake I’m looking for the key to her gate. I want to be on the other side, where the grass is cut and greener. I want to break the dam, like Katrina. Yo! Fellas, Have you seen her? I'm head over boobs for Brittney. When I see her my jaw hangs to the ground. "Eventually my head will follow down". _________________________________________________________________________________ I can't fight my feelings for this lady. You'll need the dean to put what I feel for her in detention and divine intervention to send my love for her in suspension. Well, I'm not sure what genre this fit in to rap or hip hop, I just came up with what I was thinking it, and since I was small, I known poems to RHYME as well. And I know poems don't have to but I like to when do I poem

Public Comments

1. well your defently not gonna win the pulitzer..... but an A for effort.
2. umm - why don't you just say you have the hots for Brittney? Sorry - not a rap or hip-hop person..though I think in their world this piece might get somewhere...although I'd replace Brittney Spears with some anonymous chick so that guys would be more likely to relate.
3. lol its a perfect rap gj